还有什么算是personal information and its nenessary ?
“Dood in using Microsoft office suite”
改成"Skilled with Microsoft Office Suite."
If you are applying to foreign companies, give examples of times you have worked creatively and proactively (these are skill that most Chinese graduates do not have).
Give examples of times you have: solved problems, worked as a team, managed your own time etc
Under hobbies do not write "swimming".
You don't need to include your height, weight, star sign, blood type etc.
@莫明: Thank you so much about your ”改错误”it does help!
@pomegranate,i actually apply to foreign company,但是我做的兼职都是在大一和大二做的，而且最长的时间是一个月，你的意思是让我把这些经历写成一小段儿吗？？
and thanks for your suggestion~
Definitely write your work experience. But what you write should be about SKILLS.
I worked at company X. Here I learned to work as a team, solve problems, supervise others, and think on my feet.
I worked at company Y. Here I learned to manage my own time, prioritise my own work, use industry-standard software.
Don't just write names, dates, figures etc without mentioning what YOU CAN DO!
@:pomegranate,i got it! hehe,thank you!