Discussion » Dating & Romance » Inspiration.....

  • KubanskaKvinna
    KubanskaKvinna wrote:
    The skies are free from clouds,
    On this late Saturday evening.
    A girl sits hugging her knees,
    Enduring the cool October breeze.
    The ocean waves crash ashore,
    Beating against the rocks below.
    On this cliff standing tall,
    She prepares to take a fall
    In love she is with a wonderful guy,
    Now to tell him how she feels.
    Panic bells ring around her ears,
    As day dreams bring her to tears.
    he found her sitting alone,
    Wondering if anything was wrong.
    A fake smile is all she can do,
    While contemplating an 'I love you'
    Before she could turn to speak,
    He hushed her quivering lips.
    Deep into her eyes he stared,
    And told her how much he cares.
    She apologizes to God in her mind,
    'Sorry God, I'm stealing an angel'
    She can see Heaven in his eyes,
    It takes away all her butterflies.
    She manages to say 'I love you'
    He smiles and returns the words.
    She looks at the Heavens above,
    As she kisses her one true love.
  • Joakim Berg Solum
  • Stian Moe
    Stian Moe wrote:
    HEHEHE thnx guys for the comments, and there is no Mr Right( 4 the moment hehe)
  • Patrick Coleman
    also Mr/Mrs Left, or will left or have left or will just leave.
  • Petter Meisfjordskar
    This is a double sonnet, what remains is the end rhymes. However, it all shows that some people mis understand or so the affection that their bfs/gfs have. They need to be shown strong love to realize that. A girl wanting to kill herself here shows how people need open love and affection. How love is mysterious, and how we can do things, extraordinary because of love. I have always told my students in a literature class, that the worst thing to do on earth is to fall in love.

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