You should do something with the bottom edge of the t-shirt so it's not cut with a straight line. Also - try adding some color somewhere. Similar to the photos where most of it is black and white, but the object in focus is in color
You give me a blue day:
I think the shape coming from the saxophone is too thick. How about adding some thin lines similar to what music notes are written on that goes through the text, and where that shape is now, the lines can just follow and end up
down in the sax.. like this:
also, the space between the sax and end of the sentence should have some notes :-)
would look way better without the "my target" text I think :-) Also, the + in the crosshair should go a little outside the circle i think :-)
Is this supposed to be "Stage" ? Anyways, i think the font is too light. Since the image is so rough, a elegant classic font looks kinda wierd to it :-) This goes for the other ones using the same font too...
Else from that: good job! =)